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» Poem: beaten with a stick(kahno, plz save me)
beaten with a stick(kahno, plz save me)
written by i_love_sandy
05:37 PM 8/27/04
I am being beaten to to the ground
now my heart cannot be found
beaten in the head
soon enough i will be dead
beaten till i fainted
cuz of him my soul is tainted
i still need his love, his hugs, his touch
i need his life, his heart and such
I know this sounds crazy but i still love this guy
but i cant tell him straight out, i am too shy


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
kahno will eventually read this poem and find out i still have feelings for him even though its like he beat my heart with a stick... i am usually not like this...not chasing someone who broke my heart...its crazy....its wierd...leave comments

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» Comments / Feedback
by Xx brOken xX (8-27-2004 - 06:32 PM)
aww girl i know what you mean! thats so crazy! we do have a lot in common (at least with the guys!!) dont worry, sooner or later he will realize what he's missing and he'll regret ever leaving you. just have faith and he'll come back to you! :) cyaa

by Trapezium (8-29-2004 - 11:23 AM)
well... as soon as you understand me... maybe i'll understand you... sorry

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