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Patience bled fiction(Poetic version)
written by maledeth08:21 AM 8/28/04What a humble silence as I wait...
Tonight I see the stars asphyxiate.
The only thing I gained from you...(patience)
The one true thing I never had.
Must you make me wait this late?
Never hoped to ever take,
This commence of regret and hate.
Never seen lips so lovely...
Can't believe the lies they make.
Dismal moon raised up high.
What a pitiful scene, this night.
Beckoned to be ruined by the fake.
I will rid my life of you, I'm certain...
As my patience bleeds your fictions of my veins.
What a serene calm, this wait...
As I see our love asphyxiate. |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by DonnieDarko (8-28-2004 - 09:30 PM)
| hey! lol ive been reading your stuff and i really like it..so theres your coment and i mean it. keep writing! qiana |
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