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Painful suicide
written by Lovely_Suicide09:39 AM 8/29/04If you can't see me
If you can't hear me
What am i to do?
When i scream for help
When i begin to fall
Who do i turn to when im invisible?
My wrist bleeds in pain
They yawn for attention
But none they will get
My wrists will die without love
Without care
My blood stains my bed
MY walls
My floor
My blood everywhere
No one can see
No one even knows
My final ending a painful suicide. |
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My poems suck im not good at anything..:(
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| » Comments / Feedback | by (anonymous) (8-30-2004 - 03:44 AM)
| your poems are soo good -wipes small tear- i relate to most..me= suicidal, depressed, alone, in pain, 14, without hope..i know how you feel..im here... if you need to talk to someone..ill listen..if you need help..well im not that good at helping but i can try! MooMooMeoww on Aim and i_like_cheese_43@hotmail.com, and um Mohawkgirl6669 on yahoo..once again love your poems! |
by Trapezium (8-30-2004 - 01:41 PM)
| you may not be good at anything but you're bloody excellent at writing poetry!.. that's not being good it's being great! keep them coming |
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