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Your world, My world
written by Lovely_Suicide03:12 AM 8/30/04Your world and my world are wide apart
You live in a world full of happiness friends and enlightment
I live in a world full of pain sadness and loneliness
Our worlds could never connect
If they met they would clash
Because Sadness hates Happiness
And Pain hates enlightment
And Loneliness hates friends
Our worlds are somewhat different
You with your opions about people who commit suicide and cut themselves
Me with my dosage of cutting
We can never meet
Never talk
Never ever connect
Because you and me our worlds are to far apart. |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
Please comment plz i need t know how much i need to improve my poems cuz they suck
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| » Comments / Feedback | by arcangelof04 (8-30-2004 - 03:41 AM)
| I can relate so much to your poem. it doesnt suck....it's fuckin insanely awesome...anyway im gettin carried away.... |
by Trapezium (8-30-2004 - 01:55 PM)
| you don't need to improve your poems... it would be hard for anyone to do better |
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