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» Poem: I Cut myself tonight
I Cut myself tonight
written by Lovely_Suicide
10:15 AM 9/2/04
I started crying
I got pissed off
I grabbed my razor and cut my wrists
I watched the blood run out enjoying it
Then i cut my legs
Satisfied for what i have done
Planning to do more tonight
To see more blood
Now as i look down at the marks
I have an urge to do more
I have an urge just to do make myself bleed over and over
Just keep cutting and never stop
But i know i can't
So i'll have to cut myself as often as i can.


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
Just what i feel like doing and what i have done

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» Comments / Feedback
by Breaking the Habit (9-2-2004 - 10:22 AM)
you're disgusting

by Shirk (9-2-2004 - 01:11 PM)
I think it's good! You're damn good making poems (Have read some others of yours..). They remind me of myself sometimes - //Shirk.

by Trapezium (9-2-2004 - 02:52 PM)
why's it disgusting bth? a hell of a lot of people cut... and it's addictive... the (forgotten name hehe) released get you addicted to self harm just so they can be released... it's not sick loving blood... many eople feel the warmth quite enlightening... and in poetry many write about experiences... so how's it sick?

by BamBam666 (9-3-2004 - 01:20 AM)
I know how you feel... I have a REALLY bad habbit of cutting myself. It makes me feel better. ~*Alison

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