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» Poem: Drawing of pain.
Drawing of pain.
written by Lovely_Suicide
03:17 AM 9/5/04
Im drawing my pain onto this page
Drawing with nothing but my blood
Using pins and needles to draw it
Outling my body with dread
Sketching the outsides of my pain
The blood runs out

I deep my needles and pins into my open wound on my wrist
I begin to draw again
Deeper and deeper i curve into this drawing of pain
Gripping reality holding me tight
Making me press deeper into this page

The blood pours out as i try to press in deeper
i am confused by what i see
But still i sit there and draw my pain
The pain is deepening, meaningful
Showing me the shell that i live in
Making me realize just how real this is

My vision is cloudy as i keep on drawing this pain
I press deeper still needing to make sure i draw it right
I use so much blood just to draw this picture
It seems like forever before i finally finish
My vision seems to clear dramatically
Putting me in utter shock

Im looking down at my thigh
What i thought was paper but was in fact was not
Messy blood is everywhere
Pouring out of my leg
Jagged sharp lines everywhere
But the picture is perfect
Not a thing that shoudnlt be there
This is my drawing of pain.


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
yeah yeah go on keep teasing me

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» Comments / Feedback
by vampire_princess (9-5-2004 - 03:32 AM)
teasing you? what do you mean teasing you? you seem really cool! and your an awsome writer i don't know why anyone one would tease you for! keep up the good work :))

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