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22 suicides
written by Lovely_Suicide
02:17 AM 9/6/04
1st.

She hated herself for what she did
she made a noose and hang herself there.

2nd.

she hated the world for giving her crap
she got a gun and blew out her brains

3rd.

She couldn't keep her secret anymore it was to much to bear
She got some pills and swallowed them all

4th.

she threw away her life just for this one guy
But wasted it when he didn't even noticed she existed
she Jumped over a tall builiding and landed with a 'splat'.

5th

Her heart torn in pieces
Her life a mess
She grabbed a knife and slit her throat

6th

She spends her life being caught in the middle of fights
she can't handle the violence
she grabbed a knife and ran it threw her heart

7th

Shes all alone and sad no one to talk to at all
She drops herself in the ocean

8th

she was never good at anything no one was ever proud of her just always ashamed
She makes a noose out of wire and wraps it around her throat

9th

She only spent her life listening to crap being bullied and teased
She jumps in front of a truck and heard from no more

10th

She was alive for nothing only here for peoples enjoyment
She swallows a jar of pills and hangs herself

11th

She lives in pain the world on her shoulders
She gets a knife and slashes both wrists

12th

She just didn't want to live
She grabbed a shootgun and shot it threw her heart

13th

She hated the way she looked and hated her weight
She grabbed a knife slit her wrists and jumped off a bridge

14th

She hated her herself more then anything in the world
She took some pills and drown herself in the bath

15th

She never existed never breath no one even noticed she was there
She electrocuted herself

16th

She smiled for everyone but was dying inside the pain got to much so she blew herself away

17th

Fight, Yell, Scream.
Fight, Yell, Scream.
Taunt and embarrased.
She threw herself threw a glass window
Glass punctering her skull

18th

No good no use
She boiled herself in hot water

19th

Pissed at herself and everyone around her
She poured petrol on herself and set herself alit

20th

No one taught her
No one teahched her
No one liked her thats was clear
She jumped in between an elevator

21st

Stuffed herself up
She slashed her wrists, thoat and chest

22nd

Felt to much to want to live
Spilt acid onto her head

22 suicides could of been prevented
22 suicides not yet noticed
22 sucides in under a minute
22 suicides no one even noticed
22 suicides no even cares about.


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
The cause of the sucides are from me things that happened how i feel etc etc etc

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» Comments / Feedback
by distraught_thoughts (9-6-2004 - 02:34 AM)
niftyness

by XxMusicSavesXx (9-6-2004 - 03:21 AM)
omg that is deep and true, some people just give up or their hearts just give out and they just decide to take matters in their own hands and alot of people just think of it as another dead person and that is so sad

by Rangersfan1219 (9-12-2004 - 12:54 AM)
i like all ur poems but this one speaks to me the most wow just wow

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