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» Poem: Cutting, Bleeding and doing it again
Cutting, Bleeding and doing it again
written by Lovely_Suicide
02:47 AM 9/6/04
Im cutting and bleeding
And restarting again
Hoping that maybe ill hit a vein
And create an internal stain.

Cutting and bleeding
And restarting again
I know i've gone completely insane
But still i can't feel any pain.

Cutting deeper
Bleeding worse
Doing it all over again
I start to feel the pain
But yet just merely a stain

Cutting even deeper
Bleeding even worse
Doing it over and over again
I think i've hit a vain
The blood falling like rain

A knock at the door
My razor falling to the the floor
A sight that i can not ignore
This scene will create a war

Mum walks in
Mum can see my skin
Dripping with blood
Mum begins to explode

The scene is horrible
not at all adorable
I feel unstable
At she beginngs to yell.

An hour later
Im still in my room
Cutting
Bleeding and doing it again.


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by XxMusicSavesXx (9-6-2004 - 02:57 AM)
deep...

by distraught_thoughts (9-6-2004 - 03:57 AM)
very good indeed.

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