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» Poem: death of my seasons
death of my seasons
written by i_love_sandy
03:47 PM 9/6/04
its hard for me to see the light
to leave my dead space with hatred so alive
writhing with this sickeness
thrown into banality....i decay
killed by my weakness and forced to return
just turn it off(my life my life)
i am tortured, i watch the stars as they fall from the sky
i held a fallen star(sandy)and it whept for me
i feel the fallen stars ecircle me now, as they cry
out there so quickly grows malignant tribes.
posthuman extinction excels all unrecognized
i am feeling surrounded, so bored with my mortality
...i decay
all of my hatred is fuckin real...turn it on(my lifemy life)
i wont be alright despite what they all say.plz watch my stars tonight as they dissapear, disinigrate
and i disinigrate cuz this hate is fucking real
and i hope to shade the world as the starts go out and i disinigrate


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
AFI inspired about my life right now..just watching all i love die and my life crumble around me....i will be the next to go...i hope...tell me what you think...

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» Comments / Feedback
by Trapezium (9-6-2004 - 06:51 PM)
that's just an edited song... there's no way you can right that good lol

by Morbid Angel (9-6-2004 - 07:28 PM)
Omg you suck :D

by Darkwolfgirl (9-6-2004 - 08:16 PM)
i thought it was pretty good.

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