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» Poem: How Does It Feel?
How Does It Feel?
written by Morbid Angel
07:24 PM 9/6/04
How does it feel knowing we had something real,
Knowing you let go at the first sign of a tear?

How does if feel when you remember our times?
Were they good, or painful or did they hurt inside?

How does if feel when you look at pictures of me?
Do they make you cry or smile, what do you see?

How does it feel when you know that I loved you?
Did you ever love me too, were your words true?

How does it feel to know that I hate you now?
I'm tired of you hurting me and pulling me down


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
Funny how sometimes love turns into hate isn't it? You try so hard to make them realise you need them and all they can do is hurt you and practically spit in your face.

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» Comments / Feedback
by Xx brOken xX (9-6-2004 - 08:54 PM)
i understand exactly what you mean! guys can be such assholes sometimes! it is pretty funnie how love turns into hate. its happened to me before so i know what your talking about. good job. keep it up :) !

by Trapezium (9-9-2004 - 11:48 AM)
the first stanza just caught me in the moment so to speak... it's a really good poem... I know I said this on msn but I reread it and I just want you to know how wonderful it really is

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