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» Poem: i know i suck(sandy is right)
i know i suck(sandy is right)
written by i_love_sandy
07:35 PM 9/6/04
i suck at my writing and all other things
but dont rub it in...my ears filled with rings
i suck at pretending i wont die
so why dont i do it...why dont i fly
why doesnt sandy let me go
i dont care...my blood will show
i cant stand the pain and hurt anymore
all of these lies are making my heart sore


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
i am commiting suicide..........and sandy can save me but he wont....so i guess i am just gonna go now........

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» Comments / Feedback
by Morbid Angel (9-6-2004 - 09:43 PM)
Hey I'm sorry for the poem, It was kinda mean and I shouldn't of judged you like that. You don't suck. I'm sorry x

by Trapezium (9-9-2004 - 11:43 AM)
Cass... she aint gonna comit suicide... she's said she will about 70 times now... she never attempted it any of these times... she's just going for the guilt trip

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