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» Poem: Take me away
Take me away
written by fuzzypunkhat
09:52 PM 9/6/04
This life is dreadful and I can't wait to die,
I'm tired of being here and so alive because it's killing me slowly but I just won't die,
Why? Why? Take me away! Take me away!

You won't take my hand, do I have to shove my fingers into your grasp,
Take me away! Take me away!
This life is not healing this life is just giving me more wounds.

This life is sad this life is sorrow,
Take my hand already,
Take me away! Take me away!

You dove into a deep red hole, take me away! Take me away!
I jumped on your back,
You took me away.


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» Comments / Feedback
by distraught_thoughts (9-6-2004 - 10:55 PM)
i likes...i wrote something with 'take me away' kinda in it. i think it said save me though. oh well whatever. heh.

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