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» Poem: the forgotten girl
the forgotten girl
written by i_love_sandy
01:51 AM 9/8/04
she is sitting on a cold bed
with nothing left to be done or said
she is looking out to that winding road
carying the world....that heavy load
she loses ther sences and openes the window
jumps out and looks....it seems to glow
she walks down the path and comes to a ledge
with her flowing black torn dress she walks to the ledge
she closes her eyes and makes a little wish
then her limbs, her whole body begins to swish
she begins to fall and doesnt want to fly
she falls off the cliff...hoping she'll die


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
ssspppoooookkkkyyyyy!!!!! its about a vision i keep seeing of myself....its awesome! leave comments please!

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» Comments / Feedback
by Trapezium (9-9-2004 - 11:45 AM)
sometimes you just have visions because it is what you want (or not want for that matter) most... It is quite a good poem though... they're not as repetitive now =)

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